Stories from my little corner of the world, the South. Some are from the present, some from the past...but all are from my heart.

They reflect my thoughts and views, my musing about the world, and each carries with it a bit of my heart
and soul.

Friday, October 10, 2014

Journey on a Rainy Night


 I wrote this poem several years ago after a long, wet drive my family and I made up Hwy 441 to my parents house in Fargo, GA

Journey on a Rainy Night

Raindrops splat onto the windshield.
Shattering into tiny beads, they run a race
at breakneck speed towards the window’s edge.
The oncoming traffic’s headlights,
diffused by the downpour,
elongates into vertical shafts of light
that frolic across the glass
as the approaching car draws nearer.


The darkness is alive with the music of wetness.
Our tires whirl on the oil and water-slick asphalt
sending a steady hum upwards through the floorboard.
The incessant swish of the wiper blades
serenades us as soothingly as a lullaby.
Loud pops of the raindrops,
hitting solidly against the glass,
adds percussion to the rainy road song.


We barely speak---
ensconced in our own thoughts
and our warm womb of metal and glass.
Familiar melodies of our youth
flow from the radio and swirl about us
as we hurtle through the damp darkness.


The landscape outside is obscure and gloomy.
Our headlights throw muted shadows
on the forest that flanks the highway.
The trees’ silhouettes suggests towering monsters
just beyond the roadside,
with arms outstretched to welcome the downpour.
Their thirsty leaves lap the falling moisture.


Faint lights of distant houses
shimmer like a mirage.
Their halogen yard lights glow golden,
resembling fallen stars suspended
a few feet above the earth.



As we speed along our journey
the sea of darkness is broken
by occasional islands of illumination.
A gas station,  a truck stop
gleaming brightly with enticing offers
of hot coffee, sticky doughnuts, and sweet chocolate.


The showers slow to a drizzle.
Lulled, we shut off our wipers.
A fine mist, as sheer and delicate as Irish lace,
settles easily onto the glass.
The distortion renders the landscape foreign.
We surrender to its opaque power
and the wipers once again dance
to a familiar, syncopated beat.


Occasional signposts,
made incandescent by our beams,
herald upcoming towns:
Worthington Springs, Lake City , Fargo.
Our journey lessens with each mile we speed
along the drenched ebony asphalt ribbon.
We race steadily onward,
our radials singing a sloppy, wet road melody,
as they hurry us towards our destination---home.


Rose S. Williams~2005
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